Scenario: My friend is taking the subject called "English for Communication 1" on October 2012/2013 semester for the course Pengajian Jarak Jauh (PJJ). During the first class, his lecturer, Dr. Samynathan asked my friend and his classmate to write the short essay about "My Favourite Food". He asked me for help to write the essay.
Original Essay
My favourite food is Tom Yam. Tom Yam is came from Thailand and become one of the Malaysian favourite food. Tom Yam can be served in many ways, such as steamboat, Tom Yam soup with bee hoon, Tom Yam soup with Yee Mee and so on. I prefer Tom Yam served in steamboat because the taste of the soup is spicy and a lot of different ingredient such as seafood to make it taste good. As a conclusion, Tom Yam is the best from Thailand.
Essay Checked by the Lecturer
My favourite food is Tom Yam. Tom Yam
is came comes from Thailand and
has become one of
the Malaysia
n favourite
food dishes. Tom Yam can be served in many ways, such as steamboat, Tom Yam soup with bee hoon, Tom Yam soup with Yee Mee and so on. I prefer Tom Yam served in steamboat because the taste of the soup is spicy and a lot of different ingredient such as seafood to make it taste good. As a conclusion, Tom Yam is the best from Thailand.
By Kirby510 (Sunday, October 20, 2013, 05:47 p.m.)
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